My name is Andre and I live in a mansion in Mission Bay, with five huge bedrooms and the best kitchen you've ever seen. One day when i was just heading off to the toilet when I heard a big explosion outside and i got scared and looked the door, I saw some steam and didn't think it was too important, so went to the bathroom. Five minutes later i got off the bowl and went outside to see what was happening and then I noticed that it wasn't just smoke any more. I heard explosions and tons of ash and rocks and also a huge amount of smoke. the ash headed right towards me so i shut the doors and my house was covered with ash. After a while the ash cleared up and i saw a huge island in the middle of the water and lava was dripping out from the top of the island and melted everything.
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Hi Andre, here's your point score!
ReplyDeleteYou correctly used (for 3 points each):
steam
ash
island
lava
I liked how you used the word 'tons' to describe the amount of ash.
You lost a point from not using a capital letter at the start of the sentence "the ash headed right towards me."
So your total score was 13!
I would have really enjoyed to read an explanation from you about what was happening under Auckland at that point - how the hotspot under Auckland was causing all the things you described!
Thanks for sharing your story :)
Hi Andre. Were you scared? I wonder what this smelt like?
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